Tuesday, February 21, 2012

favorite movie and peer review changes

1) The biggest change i would do, is merge my two paragraphs of repetition into one, and then write a paragraph on the line, "He also wants the audience to  develop a sense of urgency and importance by connecting through this constant use of repetition."
2) In my simile paragraph, I will do more analysis focused around imagery.
3) Replace a couple of words that I used in my essay, for example the word "coerce" sounds kinda negative and would better be replaced with convinced.

My favorite move is: WARRIOR (2011). period. watch it.

2 comments:

  1. I wanted to see that so bad but wasn't sure if it was worth it! Now I'm definitely going to see it.

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